Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Wyoming Part 1


The bus rocked on the gravelly road, full with ten kids and 12 huge duffle bags. We were all tingly with excitement, but also nervous to leave home and take on Wyoming. We saw the flat plains with the cactus like plants. The plants let out a sweet aroma of rosemary, that drifted into the bus. We sang to pop music, and chattered with our bus partners all the way to the campground. We weren't thinking about the past or the future. Just living in the present. 


6 comments:

  1. Thats so true about what busses are like. Loved your description!

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  2. You used great descriptive language in this post. I like how you mentioned the "sweet aroma of rosemary." This writing really appealed to the readers senses. Your last line is perfect - it leaves the reader something to think about. Well done!

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  3. I liked the descriptive language.

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  4. You did a great job wording this slice, good job!

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  5. I love your descriptions, my bus rides are like this except i usually sleep for half an hour. Great slice.

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  6. And that's what a field trip should be... living in the present. ENJOY!

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